And all the while I lived with this terrible premonition: that, were a girl in uniform, through what I recognised would have been an act of random kindness on her part, actually to have taken it upon herself to initiate me into the pleasures of upright sexuality, fully dressed, one eye kept open for the military police, the cries of soldiers revelling in the distance, the rough salt air blowing off the Irish Sea, I would have responded by falling so desperately in love with her that, as likely as not, my feeble sense of what being a soldier required of me would have crumbled, and the next night, and the next night, and the night after that, would have seen me standing under her window, a common deserter, shouting out her name through my tears.It takes a unique writer to craft such a long, winding sentence, multi-faceted but never confusing, grammatically perfect but using only the barest of syntactical tools, the comma. It would have been criminal were this style not to have been published, admired, and learned from.
Labels: English Literature, Richard Wollheim
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